DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
My teacher gave me the following feedback:1. She didn't understand how the image related to tattoos and that she mainly focused on the back of her head
2. I need to make the tattoos look more realistic on photoshop
3. The organisation is still lacking inspiration from real double page spreads
4. The title font is not appropriate
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The feedback i was given are: 1. The title needs to be more catchy
2. Still needs precise detail like the white boxes under the text should not have a black line
3. The tattoos need to look more realistic
4. Need to fix the text sizes
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