Monday 4 April 2011

Ancillaries Draft 4

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

My feedback:

1. The image was a good concept but maybe each half of the image could be at the sides of the page

2. The images on the left do not communicate the perception of tattoos

3. The title is not eye catching and maybe it could relate to the focused image







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My feedback:

1. Make the tattoos look more realistic through photoshop

2. Need to fix the font sizes to large, medium, small


















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