Ancillaries Draft 3

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

My teacher gave me the following feedback:

1. She didn't understand how the image related to tattoos and that she mainly focused on the back of her head

2. I need to make the tattoos look more realistic on photoshop

3. The organisation is still lacking inspiration from real double page spreads

4. The title font is not appropriate

NEWSPAPER ADVERT

The feedback i was given are:

1. The title needs to be more catchy

2. Still needs precise detail like the white boxes under the text should not have a black line

3. The tattoos need to look more realistic

4. Need to fix the text sizes

Ancillaries Draft 2

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

My teacher said that i needed to change a few things:

1. Change images as they make the article look like its about fashion

2. I need to change the organisation as it looks like it is boring to read

3. Too much text

4. I need to think about the text size

NEWSPAPER ADVERT

1. The image does not correspond to the idea of tattoos and makes the advert look like a streets documentary.

2. Must look more into channel 4 adverts and focus onto detail

Ancillaries Draft 1

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD

My teacher told me that i had some faults about my newspaper advert

1. The images did not relate to the perception of tattoos

2. I should relate the title to communicate something about the documentary

3. I need to take my own images and that maybe i could have more pictures around the page

4. There needs to be a subtitle

5. must include page number/ magazine type etc

6. Should include drop capital at start

Over all level: 1/2

Overall mark: 3/4

NEWSPAPER ADVERT

The things my teacher said i could improve on are:

1. To link the images to the perception of tattoos and said that the footballer has nothing to do with tattoos.

2. She didn't like that the word INK was in different colours

3. I need to take my own original images to link to the perception of tattoos

Overall level: 2

Overall mark: 5

Documentary Final Draft

Evaluation.

The evaluation is starting to get together as my audience feedback and new technologies questions is now completed.


Today i started on the conventions questions

I found this question to be quite easy as i knew exactly what conventions i used which were a presenter and interviews

The challenge of conventions that i used was that we had a black female presenter instead of the normal white male/female

Start of Ancillaries

The start of ancillaries we had to plan different ideas for our double page spread and our advert:

Documentary Draft 3

WWW:

- Wide variety of different interviews

- The content of what they interviewee said was interesting

EBI:

- Could get some public interviews

- Still too many interviews

- Too many images

Evaluation.

In the evaluation I'm currently doing the audience feedback question.


-I asked two people what they liked about the documentary and they said they thought that the title was a good idea as it was hand written on someones skin to make it look like a tattoo

-They thought that the visual was corresponding to the voiceover

Sometimes they got a bit confused on what the topic of the documentary was about. Whether it was about tattoos within ages or within genders.