Start of Ancillaries

The start of ancillaries we had to plan different ideas for our double page spread and our advert:

Documentary Draft 3

WWW:

- Wide variety of different interviews

- The content of what they interviewee said was interesting

EBI:

- Could get some public interviews

- Still too many interviews

- Too many images

Evaluation.

In the evaluation I'm currently doing the audience feedback question.


-I asked two people what they liked about the documentary and they said they thought that the title was a good idea as it was hand written on someones skin to make it look like a tattoo

-They thought that the visual was corresponding to the voiceover

Sometimes they got a bit confused on what the topic of the documentary was about. Whether it was about tattoos within ages or within genders.

Evaluation.

I have just started to answer the question of new technologies

This is difficult to answer because one of the new technologies we started using was indesign and at this moment i am not comfortable using it, so i'm was a bit conscious about having to talk about it in the evaluation.

Halfterm filming Vlog

- In the half term we ended up deciding to have a presenter because we thought it would be better communication for the audience.
- We also came into school so that we could do final editing.

Documentary Draft 2

Here is my documentary draft 2:


In our second draft of our documentary we received good feedback and things to do.




WWW:

- The voice over corresponded well to the visuals

- Good beginning into the documentary

EBI:

- Need to fix the quality of the interviews as the lighting was pretty bad

- Too many interviews

- Need to focus more on sub topic

Script draft 2