DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
My teacher said that i needed to change a few things:1. Change images as they make the article look like its about fashion
2. I need to change the organisation as it looks like it is boring to read
3. Too much text
4. I need to think about the text size
NEWSPAPER ADVERT
1. The image does not correspond to the idea of tattoos and makes the advert look like a streets documentary.
2. Must look more into channel 4 adverts and focus onto detail
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